ext_360750 ([identity profile] chromatic-coma.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hetaliasunshine 2009-10-10 06:23 pm (UTC)

O_O

Excuse me for a moment while I lift my jaw off the floor and re-attach it properly.

THIS IS THE VERY BEST BAD FRIENDS TRIO FIC I HAVE EVER HAD THE PLEASURE OF READING. I think you've got it all, how their relationship is not romantic, per se, but how it's more than just friendship; it's like they're three parts of a whole. The way they sleep together, make all those cute inside jokes and know one another better than they know themselves, it's absolutely perfect.

The interactions here could not be better; if Gilbert read this, he would certainly stamp it AWESOME!!! <3

Gah, I'm such a nitpick, but there was one minor detail that was a bit off "and it was nearing sunrise", but it was "It was nearly eight". Generally speaking the sun is risen before 8 AM regardless of the time of the year, but especially in the summer, where it rises much, much earlier than 8. Nothing major, just something that cought my attention

This is so brilliant~ <3

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