This is . . . amazing. It would have been easy to lose track of the characters or give one of them not enough focus, or any number of issues that would come up when writing so many characters in a relationship with each other, but you completely rocked it, seriously. I was really impressed by how well you captured all of their personalities, and how you sold on me on this as a foursome that would really work, no matter how wary I was at first. I came away from reading it with a gigantic grin on my face. Just an incredible job, really.
I also really liked how you didn't focus on sex at all, even though it was obviously going on, instead focusing more on the personality logistics of all four of them, and the emotions, and all the rest of it. I thought it really added something to the fic.
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Date: 2009-10-14 06:34 pm (UTC)I also really liked how you didn't focus on sex at all, even though it was obviously going on, instead focusing more on the personality logistics of all four of them, and the emotions, and all the rest of it. I thought it really added something to the fic.
I loved this. ♥ ♥ ♥ Really. :D Great job.